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    A Fisherman at 4 AM

    well lisas infatuated with what it was
    and lisas calling back because
    lisas falling, yeah falling so in love
    or so she says, she says:
    "hey I drew these lines in front of you"
    shes something but shes nothing new

    Why pretend?
    shes staring through my eyes again

    hey, marias got a brand new way
    to rope me in
    showing me what might have been
    yeah she calls me just to hear me say
    "maria, im just not happy here today"
    hey maria we can do this anyway
    maria i love the problems you create

    Hey nothing to something
    Hey nothing to something
    time again and time again
    Why pretend, Why pretend
    its nothing to something

    Lisas crying while shes calling me
    she gives up and she falls asleep
    this doesn't sit too well with her
    she wont believe what im telling her
    so Ill do this the honest way
    Lisa watches as our promise fades

    Why pretend?
    Shes staring through my eyes again

    hey, Maria hangs me out to dry
    shes acts this way with every guy
    shes friendly but that's never why
    whatever I do it comes out wrong
    I know she sleeps with nothing on
    except her flavor of the month
    I guess im lucky i had her once

    Hey nothing to something
    Hey nothing to something
    time again and time again
    Why pretend, Why pretend
    its nothing to something

    Lisa wont let me back this time
    my apologies are only lines
    forged by my thoughtless, lonely mind
    and Marias building houses
    with broken hearts and couches
    she sits on and reels them in again
    like fishermen at 4 am
    .

  • #2
    great to c ur works. this is mad, u bad boy.

    ha fab ending wasnt expecting that

    catchy something to nothing
    why pretend?

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    • #3
      I love how repetitive some of your writing is. Some people can't write anything that repeats without getting exhaustive... You do it well.
      no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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      • #4
        thanks for the feed ladies. i really dont like the hook on this at all... it doesnt fit.. i dunno. thanks though.
        .

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