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    My aged ignorance is my wrinkled belief
    in your honesty towards my heart.

    Reality tore at the heart of love that is
    a withered belief resting amongst
    ashes of my own discarded desires.

    It was
    you who ripped the
    calming scenery from my mind,
    where blossoming love found a home.

    I never knew the rain could hurt me so…

    Breaking like a clump of dirt with
    every lie that passed those tainted lips
    I once would wait a lifetime to kiss.

    My nights were met with mourning…

    You took the flames from my sun, but somehow
    it’s even harder on my eyes to look at now.

    Sunrise to sunset,
    a thousand times over
    I’m all the more colder now…



    Love is beautiful 'til the ugliness
    is presented through actions.
    But, during its absence, the sorrows
    fade and you forget why you
    let it slip away…
    Last edited by Psycho69; 02-06-2007, 05:52 AM.
    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
    Let the night be too dark for me to see
    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

  • #2
    That was beautiful, Mike. I loved the "Sunrise... now" part.
    no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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    • #3
      thanks

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      • #4
        Originally posted by ev1 View Post
        thanks
        ...?
        Now let the night be dark for all of me.
        Let the night be too dark for me to see
        Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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        • #5
          Alias!!!!!
          no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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          • #6
            this poem seems to relate to me......

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            • #7
              No i meant thanks for posting it I love your poetry

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              • #8
                Oh, oops. Sorry, I didn't catch on, lol.

                Thanks alot
                Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                Let the night be too dark for me to see
                Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                • #9
                  wow great poem.. my favorite line is this

                  My nights were met with mourning…

                  because mourning/morning.. forgot what that exact term is but anyways great poem.
                  1. Immortal Technique
                  2. Papoose
                  3. Pheave
                  4. Cassidy
                  5. Clipse

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                  • #10
                    i like that even a black sun, as such, hurts the eyes niiiice
                    You took the flames from my sun, but somehow
                    it’s even harder on my eyes to look at now.

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                    • #11
                      Thanks, uppin just for the sake of the fact I haven't posted in awhile, and to show I'm not dead.

                      Reading my stuff, might inspire me again, lol.
                      Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                      Let the night be too dark for me to see
                      Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                      • #12
                        Beautiful poem....very deep and meaningful. Excellent job.
                        Life is what you make it.

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                        • #13
                          Wow

                          Originally posted by Psycho69 View Post
                          My aged ignorance is my wrinkled belief
                          in your honesty towards my heart.
                          Reality tore at the heart of love that is
                          a withered belief resting amongst
                          ashes of my own discarded desires.
                          It was
                          you who ripped the
                          calming scenery from my mind,
                          where blossoming love found a home.
                          I never knew the rain could hurt me so…
                          Breaking like a clump of dirt with
                          every lie that passed those tainted lips
                          I once would wait a lifetime to kiss.
                          My nights were met with mourning…
                          You took the flames from my sun, but somehow
                          it’s even harder on my eyes to look at now.
                          Sunrise to sunset,
                          a thousand times over
                          I’m all the more colder now…

                          Love is beautiful 'til the ugliness
                          is presented through actions.
                          But, during its absence, the sorrows
                          fade and you forget why you
                          let it slip away…
                          I WENT TO PULL OUT THE LINES I LIKED THE BEST BUT I JUST COULDNT TEAR UP YOUR POEM THE WHOLE PIECE IS BEAUTIFUL. VERY STRONG AND VERY RELATABLE.
                          whoever you are.. i already know
                          you're not the one who got away... you're the one
                          who let me go

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                          • #14
                            Thanks alot
                            Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                            Let the night be too dark for me to see
                            Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                            • #15
                              Sir, i'm new on this message board forum stuff but your work is well thought, deep and inspirational, i've written poetry for awhile i've finished 3 notebooks full and started my fourth, i don't think its that good i've posted only three, i don't think they're very good so if you got any ideas or advice for the new kid on the block please hit me up

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