A Love Lost

[Psycho69]

My aged ignorance is my wrinkled belief
in your honesty towards my heart.

Reality tore at the heart of love that is
a withered belief resting amongst
ashes of my own discarded desires.

It was you who ripped the
calming scenery from my mind,
where blossoming love found a home.

I never knew the rain could hurt me so…

Breaking like a clump of dirt with
every lie that passed those tainted lips
I once would wait a lifetime to kiss.

My nights were met with mourning…

You took the flames from my sun, but somehow
it’s even harder on my eyes to look at now.

Sunrise to sunset,
a thousand times over
I’m all the more colder now…

Love is beautiful 'til the ugliness
is presented through actions.
But, during its absence, the sorrows
fade and you forget why you
let it slip away…

[Kali]

That was beautiful, Mike. I loved the "Sunrise... now" part.

[ev1]

thanks

[Psycho69]

thanks

...?

[Kali]

Alias!!!!!

[Th3 l3L!nD @zN]

this poem seems to relate to me......

[ev1]

No i meant thanks for posting it I love your poetry

[Psycho69]

Oh, oops. Sorry, I didn't catch on, lol.

Thanks alot

[wontstop973]

wow great poem.. my favorite line is this

My nights were met with mourning…

because mourning/morning.. forgot what that exact term is but anyways great poem.

[elemental]

i like that even a black sun, as such, hurts the eyes niiiice
You took the flames from my sun, but somehow
it’s even harder on my eyes to look at now.

[Psycho69]

Thanks, uppin just for the sake of the fact I haven't posted in awhile, and to show I'm not dead.

Reading my stuff, might inspire me again, lol.

[LoneLioness]

Beautiful poem....very deep and meaningful. Excellent job.

[hollywood221]

Wow

My aged ignorance is my wrinkled belief
in your honesty towards my heart.
Reality tore at the heart of love that is
a withered belief resting amongst
ashes of my own discarded desires.
It was you who ripped the
calming scenery from my mind,
where blossoming love found a home.
I never knew the rain could hurt me so…
Breaking like a clump of dirt with
every lie that passed those tainted lips
I once would wait a lifetime to kiss.
My nights were met with mourning…
You took the flames from my sun, but somehow
it’s even harder on my eyes to look at now.
Sunrise to sunset,
a thousand times over
I’m all the more colder now…

Love is beautiful 'til the ugliness
is presented through actions.
But, during its absence, the sorrows
fade and you forget why you
let it slip away…

I WENT TO PULL OUT THE LINES I LIKED THE BEST BUT I JUST COULDNT TEAR UP YOUR POEM THE WHOLE PIECE IS BEAUTIFUL. VERY STRONG AND VERY RELATABLE.

[Psycho69]

Thanks alot

[Midwest Lobo]

Sir, i'm new on this message board forum stuff but your work is well thought, deep and inspirational, i've written poetry for awhile i've finished 3 notebooks full and started my fourth, i don't think its that good i've posted only three, i don't think they're very good so if you got any ideas or advice for the new kid on the block please hit me up