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    fuck Shit,
    I'm Tired Of It,
    Can't Take It No Mo,
    Don't Wanna B Here Nemore,
    Feel Like Dyin,
    Tired Of Cryin,
    Jus Wanna Take That Blade To My Wrist,
    Give It A Lil' Twist,
    Blood Be Tricklin,
    Drippin While My Arms Tinklin,
    Jus Want The Pain To Go Away,
    Have Another Rainy Day,
    Day To Myself,
    Cuz I Don't Need No One Else,
    I'm Tired Of Bein Hit,
    Tired Of My Heart Bein Ripped Bit By Bit,
    I Can't Take Anymore Of It,
    I Jus Wanna Be Done Wit All Dis Shit!
    http://painizlove18.blogspot.com/

    R.I.P. PROOF

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    No offense, but I didn't like it. I don't see the point in capitalizing all your words, and the grammar is terrible, along with the rhymes.

    It just seemed like something any angst-ridden teen would come up with if they were given a piece of paper and a pen.

    Keep writing, though..
    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
    Let the night be too dark for me to see
    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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    • #3
      File 13
      Hell Yeah I'm South African...bring on the hate!

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      • #4
        ehhh pretty much exactly what psycho69 said
        My Soundclick
        http://www.soundclick.com/Nicolai


        Myspace
        http://www.myspace.com/nicolaim

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        • #5
          ightt tnx for the advice though
          http://painizlove18.blogspot.com/

          R.I.P. PROOF

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