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    fed up with all this bullshit
    none of its even worth it
    what did i do to deserve this
    why am I the only one being dissed
    I'm pissed
    this is why i hate bitches
    there jus caught up in drama lil' snitches
    yuh i'm crying
    but what next
    how about dying
    my problems would go away
    why should i stay
    nobody wants me here anyway
    I guess there's one person that wants me to stay
    my man
    just hope that sooner or later I'll build strength
    strength to let him in
    in that place where all that love is kept
    somewhere around my chest
    http://painizlove18.blogspot.com/

    R.I.P. PROOF

  • #2
    yep catchy and to the point

    IMO kicks off to a mad start but then the emo bit followed on kinda kills it ur strength and then ends up being a love poem....maybe if u expanded on each idea a lil more then continue let one flow onto the other.....at the end of the day u communicate ur ideas clearly.

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    • #3
      nice
      No! you post your noodz 1st

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