drama

[4morelove]

fed up with all this bullshit
none of its even worth it
what did i do to deserve this
why am I the only one being dissed
I'm pissed
this is why i hate bitches
there jus caught up in drama lil' snitches
yuh i'm crying
but what next
how about dying
my problems would go away
why should i stay
nobody wants me here anyway
I guess there's one person that wants me to stay
my man
just hope that sooner or later I'll build strength
strength to let him in
in that place where all that love is kept
somewhere around my chest

[elemental]

yep catchy and to the point

IMO kicks off to a mad start but then the emo bit followed on kinda kills it ur strength and then ends up being a love poem....maybe if u expanded on each idea a lil more then continue let one flow onto the other.....at the end of the day u communicate ur ideas clearly.

[Kaley]

nice