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    With a love so true,
    Iím Noah amongst the
    flood of all our tears.

    I can wear a smile,
    if only for you
    and watch you live
    from a distance.

    but my heart will
    always be smothering you.

    a man in the past
    is a man without gift wrap
    to have the present
    to hold and discover.

    hope has limits
    and love is just a piece
    to this puzzle I will
    assume is a picture of
    your sapphire eyes.

    (Iíll avoid stepping outside of them)

    and, so you knowÖ

    the break didnít break me.
    Iíve been broken.
    the good thing about this
    is, Iíve memorized
    where all the pieces fit.

    I just sometimes lay

    s.h-a t--t er/e d
    before I want to be
    together again,
    even if together isnít
    together with you.

    Iím now comfortable in my skin.
    I just miss touching yours.

    you are my heart,
    poetry is my soul.

    I spent a decade finding
    blueprints to smiles,
    and in these five months
    I came to a conclusion:

    I was a fond believer in love,
    but never of myself.

    Now I stand here,
    a boy, a poet, a man,
    who doesnít need you to
    stand beside him.

    only in front.


    What live is worth living,
    when one cannot be the architect
    of ones own smile?
    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
    Let the night be too dark for me to see
    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

  • #2
    Now I stand here,
    a boy, a poet, a man,
    who doesn’t need you to
    stand beside him.

    only in front.

    ^ Could you explain that please, more so the "in front" as opposed to beside, my bad.

    I like the broken/shattered/together ideas

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    • #3
      It's simply stating, I don't necessarily feel as if I "need" her to always be beside me, to feel I can stand on my own, in whatever way, and I can still be the same boy, poet, man without her seeming like a crutch or needing my love for her to define me as for the most part as I might of.

      The time apart, let me find a sort of independance or left me in a spot for self-discovery, and I can have her there for me to love and admire as much as ever on my own, and maybe be just as a strong.

      That's the jist of it, I'm sorry if that doesn't seem clear, I just got off work and I'm pretty out of it lol.
      Now let the night be dark for all of me.
      Let the night be too dark for me to see
      Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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      • #4
        this was awesome...and i can relate...
        Bored? CHECK IT!
        http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jz1NNr2_dfw

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        • #5
          I havent been to this part of the site in over a year now. But one thing i never forgot was who were the good writers. I came on here and you were one of the few people along with sneaky and a few others . I must say you are very gifted and have a way with words. It was a great name for a title and the way you expressed yourself was well done. Thank you for sharing your writings.
          Last edited by ssciencess; 07-28-2008, 05:23 AM.

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          • #6
            and, so you know…

            the break didn’t break me.
            I’ve been broken.
            the good thing about this
            is, I’ve memorized
            where all the pieces fit.


            my favorite
            amazing man enjoyed reading every line
            i can definitely relate
            ".........tryna battle me, please i cause terror
            then i carry motherfuckas to graves like pallbearers"
            -Quazaar

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            • #7
              i cant relate for shit
              Originally posted by FunkySuicideGirl
              Ima sucker when some suck my lip or bite in it
              Originally posted by Syko Squidge
              ^
              fuck off you gay piece of cunt
              Originally posted by Otto
              That shit is fuck,

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              • #8
                i'm always gonna be a fan of your poetry mike
                i loved the poem, especially the part "but my heart will
                always be smothering you."
                dunno why, but those are my favourite 2 lines.
                ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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