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    The world is just too demanding,
    I don’t know how to be,
    They just left me here for standing,
    And no one here for me,
    I don’t wanna stand here,
    But no one's real with me,
    Being here a long time,
    More than couple of years,
    Always fighting for mine,
    Shared more than couple of tears,
    I aint tired of fighting,
    I’m so tired of loosing,
    Always the same options,
    Got no time for choosing,
    Always the same choices,
    Am I crazy,
    Sometimes I hear voices,
    Maybe that’s loneliness,
    What’s fucking me,
    Can’t forget those suspicions,
    They’re still bugging me….

    Why they always arguing,
    Screaming at each other,
    Why can’t we live in peace,
    Get along with one another,
    I close my eyes,
    I don’t want to see it coming,
    U got your eyes opened,
    But u aint see me running,
    In the past,
    I’ve seeing too much pain,
    Spend too much time,
    Taking cover from the rain,
    Searching for happiness,
    But always missed the train...

    More than seven years ago,
    I lost my dad….
    He’s still alive,
    But why I feel like he never had,
    Why can’t I find this love,
    Why are all these feelings gone,
    Why I got feeling,
    That I’m dying inside,
    U can’t see my tears,
    Because I’m crying inside……

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      See now I think this works as a spoken word piece if you perform it with as much emotion as youwrote it with

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