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  • one old poem of mine.

    this is one of 11 poems i have written maybe post more l8er
    i will except all criticism and praise



    How can you feel like holding on,
    when all of your faith has come & gone?
    How do you make the days get better
    some days can't even write a letter?
    How do you fight for happiness everyday
    when it always seems to be taken away?
    How do you get over getting so close
    to all the people you love the most?
    How can all the hurt inside go away
    when it feels it gets stronger everyday?
    How sometimes can you feel so bad
    when there's so much love- but yet some sad?
    How do you go on day by day
    when the sky above just stays so grey?
    How do you get the strength to make things right
    and have no more fears especially at night?
    How can you deal with so much at a time
    work on so much and make it fine?
    Well - How can all these feelings change
    don't' quite know yet, it feels so strange!
    TruMonroe
    Actress,Poet,Dancer
    http://www.freeavatars.net/vpimages/signs/IRH10.gif

  • #2
    ...that was nice poem..i like it..i feel it girl..keep writeing..i write poems too..and i can see you new in here..so welcome and have fun...

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    • #3
      thanks its not one of my favorite poems and its reall hard for me to write but i try. thanks again:D
      TruMonroe
      Actress,Poet,Dancer
      http://www.freeavatars.net/vpimages/signs/IRH10.gif

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      • #4
        ...it's not that hard to write..okay sometimes it is...but you should just sit in quiet room take a pen and a paper and decide about what you wont to write...

        ...it can be about love,your vievs of life,something that bothers you and you feel like you need to just spit it on da paper, just let your emotions lead you and you'll see it's not that hard..and song was really good...you could do better but this was deep and it make sense...so keep writeing...

        ...and don't force yourself to write..just write a poem when you get inspiration ....i make the best songs when i'm inspired...better then when i just force myself to write something...

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        • #5
          thanks ill try that
          TruMonroe
          Actress,Poet,Dancer
          http://www.freeavatars.net/vpimages/signs/IRH10.gif

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