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  • B-Lynk
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    i see without seeing, darkness as clear as day
    i dream to believe, hope wat can i say?
    Inside my mind u exist, but ur not real
    u confuse me so i don't know wat i feel
    i remain humble in ur presence
    because it's u who takes away life's essence
    wat is the illusion, dream of future or belief of hope?
    either way life is lived on an inclined slope
    inside ur eyes u confine the truth
    i tryed to confide in u during troubles as a youth
    u took away wat i thought others had taken from me
    but now in darkness, i can clearly see
    its u who hurts me, u who makes me bleed
    unplanting life and freedom's seed
    ur all i thought i had in a world i thought was pain
    wen all along it was u causing my shame
    so for long i was searching for u to now find u 2 b fake
    life and of it i dont know wat to make
    at times u hide in the shadows now ur true colours r shown
    in this light filled darkness without u i shall never b alone
    if u exist in my mind, my heart must battle, let it hear my call
    to let bloodshed rain and watch in delight as u inevitably fall
    with u dies my pain, i watch ur final breath
    without u inside my mind life has many years left
    but the question is, can i beat
    wat my mind tells me i cannot defeat?
    if its all a mindstate, does my heart exist in my mind?
    the answer lies in the hourglass of time
    with its sands i begin to understand
    that at the end of the day i am but a man
    as the cold wind blows across my face
    i ask u to leave my body without a trace
    u have infected my mind for long enough now
    we can live in harmony, the question is wen not how
    I watch u leave with a smile and i wave good bye
    and ask time that hope shall always pass me by

    can ne1 who reads this please rate it and if u know who or wat im talkin 2 and about tell me cause im curious as to whether nebody understands wat i am talkin about.
    Thanx peace out B-Lynk

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  • lilgurl
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    it takes me 4ever like an hour to do a really good one, and since i love to make mine rhyme it takes a bit longer

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  • notoriousmil
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    Once I'm goin, about a good 45 minutes. The topic is usually premeditated, so from when I sit down to getting up after I'm finished it's like almost a hour.

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  • *~Angel~*
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    yea...when im on a roll, i keep rollin

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  • Shadyluv101
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    Yeah,me too.About 5-10 minutes.Once an idea is stuck,it's stuck gotta get it out quick before I go nuts.

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  • *~Angel~*
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    an idea comes, i flow with it...about 5 minutes

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  • BRabbitsBabyGRL
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    whenever it comes i write it down

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  • Da-SaVioR
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    takes me about 30 minutes to get a general idea down, then about 10 to go through a thesaurus, proof-read, and edit for content........my freestyles always rhyme so i use those for my text battles

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  • B-Lynk
    started a topic how long does it take u to write a poem?

    how long does it take u to write a poem?

    hello to nebody that replies umm i was just curious as to how much time u spend writting ur poems, cause like i dunno if its me but i write my poems like freestyles and wat ever comes to my head i just put down. U dont have 2 reply i was just asking out of curiosity and ne feed back would b greatly appreciated.....Thanx

    Peace out B-Lynk aka The Lyrical Surgeon

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