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    I was sitting on a bench right infront of the lake
    I saw a little fish, fella looked pretty baked
    So I sat down and asked him "what's wrong, dear friend?"
    He replied quickety-quick "I be smokin' some bad shit man!"
    I felt sorry for the fish, first god took his legs
    and now the marijuana smoke was taking his breath
    "Cough" I heard him going, "Cough, Cough. Shit".
    that's the words I heard out of his pretty thick lips
    His voice was like a child's one, pretty high-pitched
    I couldn't stand watchin' my friend slowly meeting the dead
    So I took a heavy rock and smashed it on his little head
    I felt good because I released him from the pain
    I had to remember him, so I kept his tiny brain..
    in my pocket...my friend, oh fish

    The Smashman
    Last edited by SmashmAn; 02-19-2004, 09:38 AM.
    ^he's from austria, without stereotyping most central/eastern europeans are sexfiends where nothing is taboo.
    -MidwestSwing

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    Smash.. I really like this! Love the end part about carrying his little brain in the pocket. Post more.
    "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before." - Poe

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    • #3
      I think your peom is pretty good but you keep speaking in the present tense when you should be speaking in the past tense.

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      • #4
        lol...that's evil man.
        lol smashed him on the head with a rock lol
        nice ! lol
        ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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        • #5
          K9 suck my cock j/k...I couldn't rhyme it other way and I think Shakespeare was talkin' like that so why not me
          ^he's from austria, without stereotyping most central/eastern europeans are sexfiends where nothing is taboo.
          -MidwestSwing

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            • #7
              lol dat was scarily twisted yet good

              u must have been buzzed too 2 heara fish talk 2 u lol j/p :P
              Mystery
              Another Fallen Soldier
              ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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              • #8
                OOOh! somebody cant handle a little criticism, i like the peom i just told you what i thought sorry if you took offence to it.

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                • #9
                  ^it's all good mawfucker...lol...I was just playin!
                  ^he's from austria, without stereotyping most central/eastern europeans are sexfiends where nothing is taboo.
                  -MidwestSwing

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                  • #10
                    Freak I tell you.. freak
                    /-\narchy.

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