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    Iím sitting here Iím watching you
    You donít know, donít have a clue
    I call your name but you donít hear
    Sweat drips from my face in beads of fear
    I shout it out but you still donít care
    You say youíre leaving but you wouldnít dare
    My heart is breaking I can hear it now
    I still love you but I donít know how
    I really hate you but you canít go away
    I need you here I need you to stay
    As you leave the air gets thin
    Something inside me something from within
    I canít breath and I canít see
    I donít love you anymore but how can this be
    I want you to leave now as fast as you can
    I no longer want you I want a different man.


    Be totally honest with what you think, i know its not as good as everyone elses but its not my best effort. i like to read and listen to poetry but i am no good at making the stuff up.It would probly sound better if this ever happened to me but i just made this up a while ago.

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    Ah! It's really really good!
    Don't bring yourself down! Cuz itz excellent!
    Everyone's way of writing poetry is different, doesn't matter how you write it
    because it's personal to you
    Hope you write some more!
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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