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  • 4 Questions of You

    Wrote this today, after bad news and after getting annoyed over stupid stuff

    4 Questions of You

    Why do you laugh when others are hurt?
    How are you happy when others feel like dirt?
    Can you answer these questions for me?
    Are you truly a friend, or an enemy?
    Letís start again, back to question one
    Donít worry. This will all soon be done
    Why do you laugh when others are hurt?
    Pain is a murderer within civilization
    Why doesnít someone put pain on probation?
    Maybe you should know, yet maybe you donít
    Youíre like a clown, juggling with your fire bolts
    People cry and die, through their teasing emotions
    You laugh and you live, always causing commotion
    For now you donít see, the more hurt you cause
    Though it will soon affect you and youíll know it was a flaw
    Letís move on to Question 2 before this drives me berserk
    How are you happy when others feel like dirt?
    You walk right through them, theyíre nothing to you
    It doesnít matter what you say or what you do
    You are much more superior to themÖall in your mind
    If you search inside yourself, look for the one youíve yet to find
    The one who feels and sees as others do
    Not the one who doesnít care, and walks on without a clue
    Stop and take a look at their facial expressions
    They are dead inside, cut up and slaughtered by their depression
    Though what would you know of that, youíre always ecstatic
    Obviously you are a true happiness fanatic
    If you now canít see, Question 3 has been bugging me
    Can you answer these questions for me?
    Are you able to be honest with the comments you make
    Do you really give a damn about me or are you just a fake?
    The way you treat others, makes me feel strange
    Maybe in your mind, you are mentally deranged
    Do you keep your emotions in the deepest shadows of your mind?
    You have to keep them locked away and never cross that line
    The line of showing your emotions to others or even me
    Being open and true to yourself is something you will never be
    Question 4, is the true answer which will open all doors
    Are you truly a friend, or an enemy?
    Sounds a lot like question 3, but means the same equally
    Friends are what mean the most to people in the world
    Though deep down inside, hate begins to unfurl
    Friendship turned to hatred in a split second
    Now the light at the end of your tunnel begins to get dim
    Soon it will all disappear and you will live how you like
    In the darkness of your mind and soul with no one to fight
    This is how your life will soon become
    Unless you change your ways before youíre eternally numb
    I hope that you can change for the sake of me
    And answer all 4 questions with a positive answer finallyÖ
    Last edited by SneakySnufflez; 02-22-2004, 03:39 PM.
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

  • #2
    That was fantastic, I really liked it

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    • #3
      i liked that a lot
      a lot of emotion, feeling
      can feel da confusion in how the person can be that way
      can feel your mind turning with all these questions

      can relate to it in both ways, in your situation
      and these lines fit me a lot

      "Do you keep your emotions in the deepest shadows of your mind?
      You have to keep them locked away and never cross that line
      The line of showing your emotions to others or even me
      Being open and true to yourself is something you will never be"

      it's mad how something not directed to u can fit u a lot
      Mystery
      Another Fallen Soldier
      ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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      • #4
        damn nice, I couldn't write somethin like that, matter of fact. I cant write for shit and especially not something people can relate to, really diggin it.
        ^he's from austria, without stereotyping most central/eastern europeans are sexfiends where nothing is taboo.
        -MidwestSwing

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        • #5
          Thanks Frusciante

          Mystery, thank you too, and yea...I showed it to Paul and he thought I wrote it for him, lol it was kinda funny.

          Smash, you can write great! Don't bring yourself down. You write and you rap! And I like what I've heard of you so far.
          ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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          • #6
            that was really good! i couldn't pick the best lines cuz everything was good
            "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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