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    i just came u with this like 2 minutes ago literally 4 no reason at all.

    might as well do something with it


    give me words so i can speak
    give me fingers so i can type
    give me a mind so i don't believe the hype
    give me a soul so i can do whats right

    Give me a moment that i can cherish
    Give me a heart so that i can feel
    Give me a motion so i can dance
    Give me a voice so i can sing


    but im not a poet 3;-)3


    Edit: just added a stanza
    Last edited by Mystery; 03-05-2004, 03:00 PM. Reason: Addin to poem
    Mystery
    Another Fallen Soldier
    ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

  • #2
    The writer in you breaks thru, enjoyed every single line of this, all 4...lol
    ^he's from austria, without stereotyping most central/eastern europeans are sexfiends where nothing is taboo.
    -MidwestSwing

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    • #3
      lmao...thank u thank u

      alwayz da smartass
      Mystery
      Another Fallen Soldier
      ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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      • #4
        it was great! lol
        "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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        • #5
          thanx....even tho i fink ur being sarcastic
          Mystery
          Another Fallen Soldier
          ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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          • #6
            have i seen this?
            i think i have...i seen it yesterday
            but i was being too bitchy to you as usual
            just cuz i care
            lol

            nice 4 little lines, whats 4 lines called...a stanza?...uh i dunno
            i did shite in my poetry coursework *shrugs*
            ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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            • #7
              why was u being bitchy 2 me yesterday?
              why u like being bitchy to me. im so hurt

              yep 4 lines is called a stanza
              what grade u get 4 your poetry coursework?



              let me add to the give me

              Give me a moment that i can cherish
              Give me a heart so that i can feel
              Give me a motion so i can dance
              Give me a voice so i can sing
              Mystery
              Another Fallen Soldier
              ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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              • #8
                i only got a B+
                I was disappointed, especially since I thought me and him had it going on...lol ew but yea. he should be ashamed.

                yes stanza, i was right.

                another stanza, two good stanzas so far.
                ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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                • #9
                  B+ is good though!!

                  but did u get 2 re-do it?
                  Mystery
                  Another Fallen Soldier
                  ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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                  • #10
                    O YEA O YEA O YEA!

                    and thank u very much
                    Mystery
                    Another Fallen Soldier
                    ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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                    • #11
                      lemme try, lemme try...

                      Give me a dick, so I can hit that chick
                      Give me a pair of nuts, so I can bust
                      in the chick, and then, give me a child
                      So I can raise it wrong, fuck wit his mind, and watch it dyin'

                      THIS IS THE OFFICIAL STANZA THREAD lol
                      ^he's from austria, without stereotyping most central/eastern europeans are sexfiends where nothing is taboo.
                      -MidwestSwing

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                      • #12
                        yea, second draft was B+

                        this is last years second piece of coursework all over. the gangster rap one, i got a B+ in that first but he let me do it again...he hasnt asked me if i wanted to to this one again.
                        ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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                        • #13
                          lol dats twisted

                          yup yup da official stanza thread


                          "blap blap" <= looks weird
                          Mystery
                          Another Fallen Soldier
                          ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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                          • #14
                            when u did da gangsta rap 1 again wat did u get afta?

                            and ask if u wanna do it again, dont wait 4 him 2 ask u
                            Mystery
                            Another Fallen Soldier
                            ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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                            • #15
                              I did gangster rap one 3 times

                              1st - no mark, only corrections
                              2nd - B+
                              3rd - A+
                              ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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