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    Failure At Life

    I can’t figure out what all this is supposed to mean
    I wasn’t supposed to happen, that’s what it seems
    I was born to be exploited, tormented and abused
    I never was meant to succeed, just too always lose
    Life is an endless fight that no one can ever win
    So really it doesn’t matter if I commit a sin
    I can cut across my wrist and no one will mind
    Because once I die I’ll be judged by that huge divide
    The one that separates Heaven from Hell
    Don’t know what’ll happen, I’ve already fell
    You treat me like a slave one that won’t succeed
    I can’t get up and do nothing, I am deceived
    May be that you are blood relations to me
    But it doesn’t matter because no one ever sees
    What happens behind closed doors is all that matters
    You shout and you scream, dreams being shattered
    Like Adams Song “I never thought I’d Die Alone?
    And I can’t keep trying because I know I’m on my own
    Why keep trying when depression is overwhelming me
    I can’t get back up, or go back to what I wished to be
    So I guess this is the end, and this is what I decide
    Now I truly know, that I’m just a failure at life
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

  • #2
    that's one deep heartfelt poem
    i like all your shit anywayz
    alwayz deep & 2 the point of emotion u feel at that time
    keep up the good work & keep ur head up
    Mystery
    Another Fallen Soldier
    ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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    • #3
      I would like to say Gemma keep your head up too. You ain't alone even if you maybe feel like you are. And I can relate to this poem a lot. You don't even have idea how this poem touched my soul.I love it.

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      • #4
        thanks...
        ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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        • #5
          Another excellent poem. I enjoyed it, very deep & emotional

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          • #6
            Another excellent poem. I enjoyed it, very deep & emotional

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            • #7
              I liked it too! Good work!
              FREEDOM IS JUST ANOTHER WORD FOR NOTHING LEFT TO LOSE !
              Janis Joplin

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              • #8
                a bit of an in-you-face read there......"being on my own" is an interesting concept for writting, i've never considered it before..... i think about being alone all the time, but yeh it's a spin out thinking about this is me, in my body-talking to myself analysing to myself...... but i believe in angels and God so i don't think that one is ever alone.

                -ALONE-thats a heaps interesting concept, as i think most people can relate to the loneliness of alone as well as being hard on ourselves.

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                • #9
                  Brilliant as always!

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                  • #10
                    i missed ur poems!! it was a long time ago that i read it...and as always like above said brilliant!!!!
                    ...ALLES IS KUNST...

                    Today there will be no remorse at all,
                    Come what may.....!

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                    • #11
                      hey, thanks for the comments on it!
                      I appreciate the kind words about something so .... gloomy :D
                      thankums!
                      ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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                      • #12
                        this is something i fear everyday that i wake up. nice that you were able to put it into words.
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                        "He Who Makes a Beast Out of Himself, Gets Rid of the Pain of Being a Man."
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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by SneakySnufflez
                          hey, thanks for the comments on it!
                          I appreciate the kind words about something so .... gloomy :D
                          thankums!
                          liked it alot even tho it was gloomy can really realate to parts
                          I sold my soul to the Devil cuz the price was cheap...

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                          • #14
                            Thanks Corey & Heaven Cent

                            ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by SneakySnufflez
                              Thanks Corey & Heaven Cent

                              yup.. its all G!
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                              "He Who Makes a Beast Out of Himself, Gets Rid of the Pain of Being a Man."
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