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  • Walking On Air

    I wrote This Some Time Ago For My Girlfriend, Feedback Is Very Welcome.


    I feel you, you're breath in rhythm with mine,
    exhalation even when we are afar.
    Together we shall shine to him, never apart,
    to cherish our love.

    Time has no barrier on me, to be by your side,
    forever even if not together.
    Endless possibilities, immersing myself in you,
    in the poetry of true love.

    My life begun the day we prate, affinity,
    from that day forth.
    You banished hurt from my existence,
    warmth sheltered me from cold.

    The gleam of purity in your stare, fixed,
    you healed me.
    I'd venture for you, no hazard you will see,
    no endanger I'd take it all.

    You have blessed me with more an love,
    but only for us to see.
    There is a star in the dark sky waiting for us,
    one day we both shall be.

    I treasure you like a heavy addiction,
    I need you, you feed me.
    The taste of delight runs through me,
    each time you say you need me.

    I'm lucky, in a sence of being in your heart,
    so close to it, it's hugging me.
    Feeling it beating harder as I clench,
    never to let go.
    Only The Illest Survive l Contaminated

    Hip Hop Station

  • #2
    I was really feeling that.. not that short and not that long and it had me reading the entire thing. I enjoyed the way you structured it too.

    Great job.
    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
    Let the night be too dark for me to see
    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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    • #3
      thank you 2:-D23
      Only The Illest Survive l Contaminated

      Hip Hop Station

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