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    This is a side of me that no one sees very often. my softer side . I originally wrote it so that i could recite it to a special someone, but she said no anyways 2#:-( , so here it is. yet again i say any input is appreciated even if you just say its good or it sucks, i dont care. i like constructive criticism. so criticize me, good or bad, all you want, I WONT CARE. thank you

    This may sound dumb or crazy
    But it’s been on my mind lately
    Please keep reading until it’s done
    Cuz to me this a very important question
    You saw a side I didn’t want you to
    I side to me that was fairly new
    And lately I have been calming down
    I’ve tried to keep a smile and not frown
    And now I use writing as anger management
    I don’t want to hurt me or anyone else again
    I started a plan to turn completely back
    So as I can regain what I now lack
    I’ve never dealt with anything this size
    Cuz all my life I’ve felt criticized
    I’m tired of feeling like I have no shot
    And I can’t hide that I like you a lot
    I was gonna ask you out to the dance
    But being pessimistic, I felt I never had a chance
    Positively, I will be all that I can be
    Now I want to ask, will you go out with me?
    Last edited by klausterfobic; 03-24-2004, 08:51 AM. Reason: to add someting

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