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    When iam hurt I aint bruce or touched/
    Its like my prayers to god aint doin nothin but makin my life rushed/


    my heart i clutch, cuz im in so much pain/
    when it rains i cry, when it snows i snort cocain/

    when its hot i blaze, watebver to slow the days/
    cuz all i got is my (nine) and i'll still die if some one fucks with the hood today/

    so i pray silently, violently is all my eyes-can-see/
    watchin younger kids act like thugs, or atleast try-to-be/

    i'd never ask someone to-cry-for-me, cuz the rivers and lakes are made from my mistakes/
    and my mistakes are tears n fears, but to change is too late/

    so i demonstrate how to act right, instead im teaching hate/
    preachings states the wrong impression,depression, its nothin great/

    the reaper doesnt await, his ass is commin for-me/
    my sorrows drain from my-pee, cuz i washed em out with forty’s/

    so god put me on probation which he should be haten/
    cuz im impatient and is more likely to make me a hos-pit-al patient/

    give some feed back.................

  • #2
    i like it. but its so real its scary.

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    • #3
      aight farmer tanx for the feed back i apreciated uppin for more Feed Back!!!!!!!!!!!!

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      • #4
        it was okay
        "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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