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    i hate how you make me feel,
    leaving me standing here to feel like this,
    my heart stops i can't breathe,
    my eye's water, I can't see,
    my heart hurts, a hole in me,
    it hurts so much, leave me be,
    i don't ever wanna see you,
    i get to attached,
    you said to me we'd always be,
    you broke my heart then lied to me,
    this is a poem i wrote for you,
    to see how you lefted me here,
    bleeding unattended, this open wound,
    is like a trophys display of brusies,
    i don't believe that i'm getting any better,
    i'm wandering this house like i've never wanted out,
    this is about as social as i get now ,
    i'm throwing away the letters i'm writting you,
    and i'm thinking awful things,
    i'm pretty sure that few would notice
    don't be a lier don't say everything perfect
    when everthings broken
    I’m not laughing You’re not leaving
    Who do I think I am kidding?
    Impress me First

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    ah!!
    I really liked that!!
    I can relate to it in a way!!
    Wonderful!!!
    :D
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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    • #3
      i hate how you make me feel,
      leaving me standing here to feel like this,
      my heart stops i can't breathe,
      "my eye's water, I can't see,
      my heart hurts, a hole in me,
      it hurts so much, leave me be,
      i don't ever wanna see you,
      i get to attached," thinking about such moments sends a shiver.


      hope you're over it kinda, hope happy things came your way to bring sunny vibes!

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