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    In the course of war some people die.
    None who survive ever wonder why.

    It was our duty, and we were prepared.
    It was a fate we all could have shared.

    Some of my fellas, in that battle war, fell.
    Some survived, though condemned to hell.

    Burdened by memories that haunt their dreams,
    Unable to quiet the bombs nor silence the screams.

    So as you lay sleeping safe in your bed.
    Know, on the battle field another soldier lay dead.

    And while you are out laying down in the street,
    That soldier in the field lay covered in a sheet.

    But when you throw rocks and rail them with names,
    As you search for a scapegoat for to lay the blame.

    Understand it is they with the courage to fight.
    And it was their blood that earned you that right.

    End.

  • #2
    Alot of ppl forget about lost soldiers that die everyday. Nice poem.
    "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before." - Poe

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    • #3
      Wow, that was amazing. I love it. Very touching and moving, had meaning, and was also written with good structrue. Keep it up
      ...
      I feast upon the weak, so speek beef - I'll shoot you n scream "Increase the peace!" - Kuniva
      ...

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      • #4
        PERFECT POEM!!!!!

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        • #5
          thank you for the reality chek.

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