I Dissappear

[Mycall]

Isn't it weird how time goes fast?
In a snap the days go by
Who knows how long we'll last
It could be your time to die
I know I won't be missed
No one even knows I'm here.
So give me one last kiss
Remember me when I Disapear

Minds a terrible thing to waste
That goes the same for time
The look of my focused face
Makes the jealous ones cry
I am not affraid
There's no man I fear
When will be the day
When I Disapear?

I'm through, I just don't care
For all matters, I could bleed
It's funny, They all stare
But there is nothing to see
I'm known as the invisible man
People not knoing I'm here
I just don't give a damn
This may be my day, When I really Disapear.

[SmashmAn]

Suicide =

..really, i am like that

[Psycho69]

I liked it.. best one you have done yet.It was longer, you put it in a good format and it flowed well. I was feeling most of it and I was liking the concept.

It reminds me of something to, i just can't think of what though...

Good work.

[april_lynn]

Thats really good!!!!!!!<3 good job

[Mycall]

Thanks, babe,

[elemental]

after the third read i enjoyed it and finally got the rhythm of it. thanx!

[tameracuja]

Good work! I like it!

[Mycall]

Uppin

[WHITEnight]

it was nice....good work

[SpeechLess]

yeah i liked it very nice keep it up mycall..

[Heaven Cent]

good shit mycall

[DraZticDaX]

i got one dats better.....

[Mycall]

Uppin