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    yesterday, before i fell asleep (isnt that how it always is? youre minds only really clear when it seems likeit shouldnt be...) iwrote this, and im so mad because i had the tune and the beat and EVERYTHING in my head, and i fell asleep. goddammit. oh well, just reminiscing so here it is:


    UNLOVABLE
    (CHORUS)
    NOBODY WANTS TO LOVE ME
    TELL ME
    WHATS NOT TO LOVE?
    WHY DO THEY ALL WEAR THEIR MASKS
    I SWEAR TO GOD IVE HAD ENOUGH

    I…
    WANNA BE LOVED
    WANNA BE LOVED

    TELL YOU THE STORY
    OF A MAN WHO STOLE MY HEART
    HIS NAME WAS JOEY AND HE
    TORE ME APART

    HE… JUST WANTED TO FUCK
    HE NEVER FELL IN LOVE…

    HIS MIND WAS FACINATING
    HE HAD HIS FILMING DREAMS
    WHY WAS I PROCRASTINATING
    TO TELL HIM THOSE THINGS

    HE… HAD A GIRL
    I NEVER WONDERED WHY HE LIED TO HER

    HE LOVED QUENTIN TERRINTINO
    AND QUOTED AL PACHINO
    SAID HE’D REMAKE “MAGIC MAN” WITH ME, OH
    HOW COULD I GIVE HIM MONEY????

    IM GONNA CALL HIM HONEY
    HE REALLY THINKS IM FUNNY
    $550 IS NO EXPENSE
    TO HELP MY LOVER PAY HIS RENT…

    I…HAVENT SEEN HIM SINCE
    SHIT THINKING OF HIM MAKES ME WINCE…OH!

    (CHORUS)
    NOBODY WANTS TO LOVE ME
    TELL ME
    WHATS NOT TO LOVE?
    WHY DO THEY ALL WEAR THEIR MASKS
    I SWEAR TO GOD IVE HAD ENOUGH!

    I…JUST WANNA BE LOVED
    WANNA BE LOVED

    (BRIDGE)
    WHY CANT I STAND TO BE ALONE?
    WHY CANT I STAND BY MY LONESOME?
    I USED TO BE HARD AS STONE
    WHY CANT I LIVE ON MY OWN…

    (MUSICAL INTERLUDE)

    (WIND DOWN)

    MY SECOND LOVE
    HIS NAME WAS SCOTT
    HE WAS ALL KINDS OF HOTT
    MUST HAVE WORKED FOR THE “GAP”
    BOYS IN COMMERCIALS LOOKED LIKE THAT!

    I MET HIM ON THE JOB
    HE WAS DRESSED LIKE A SLOB
    BUT I SAW THROUGH HIS TATTERED SHARDS
    SHIT THIS GUY HAD LOTS OF CHARM!

    HE’D FOLLOW ME AROUND
    UNTIL I’D GO OUT
    BUT I NEVER GOT TO SEE THE DAY
    CAUSE HE JUST KEPT STAYING AWAY

    HE’D GIVE ME LAME EXCUSES
    THAT AFTER TIME WERE USELESS
    I LET HIM KNOW THE ONLY WAY
    I’D FUCK IS IF HE SAID HE’D STAY

    SAID I COULD SEE POTENTIAL
    BUT THAT “L” WORD WAS CONSEQUENTIAL
    I GUESS I HAD SCARED HIM AWAY
    CAUSE HIS TRUE FACE HAD SHOWN THAT DAY

    AND JUST LIKE JOEY, HE KNEW
    THAT GIRLS IN LOVE, THEY HAD NO CLUE
    BOTH WERE SO INTELLIGENT
    NO WONDER I WAS SO HOODWINKED!

    BAMBOOZLED
    DENIED, LIED TO
    LORD THEY KNOW NOT WHAT THEY DO
    TRICKED, DECIEVED, FOOLED AND PLAYED
    ALL FOR FUCKING PERSONAL GAIN

    WHEN WILL I FIND MY EQUAL?
    OR WILL THIS CHAPTER HAVE A SEQUEL?
    SHOULD I PUT BACK ON MY SHIELD OR JUST
    BE A VICTIM OF PAINFUL LUST?

    (END CHORUS)
    WHY DOES NO ONE WANT TO LOVE ME?
    TELL ME WHATS NOT TO LOVE
    WHY DO THEY ALL WEAR THEIR MASKS
    I SWEAR TO GOD IVE HAD ENOUGH!

    WHY IS MY BODY
    A CAPE OVER MY SOUL
    MEN JUST WANNA FUCK SOMEBODY
    TO KNOW ME MUST REQUIRE CONTROL

    WHY DOES NO ONE WANT TO LOVE ME?
    TELL ME
    WHATS NOT TO LOVE
    EVERYONE, WE HAVE OUR MASKS
    BUT BOYS DON’T TAKE THEM OFF ENOUGH….

    (END)


    im going to change some words; some lyrics seem too simple to me, like they should be more metaphorical and less "typical".
    my fave part is the ending, i have the idea to slow down and drag out that last line, whatcha think?
    please delete my old profile (this 1)now that i have found the pass which is spongebmorebob27 or sunshine one of the two thanks

  • #2
    Unless those parts are being said more then really sung.. it appears to be too long in my eyes.. the ending is cool.
    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
    Let the night be too dark for me to see
    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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    • #3
      can see the typical vs metaphorical issue.

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