Elusion

[Famous420]

anxiety makes me so distant, my troubles dont sound to your deaf ears
while i drown in pools of worry implying persistent doubt & fear
a lucid mind? never that. sometimes i cant even reach myself
constant uncertainty conjures feelings that are too often felt
i pretend noones watching, invisible, to not be seen at all
i send myself into mental torture, no peace within these walls
relentless trepidation & mind bent worries that haunt my sleepless nights
deep distress & i cant dampen the voices once i turn out the lights
i cover every angle with reason till i drive myself insane
& everything i know about myself vacates me as it slowly drains
i can close my eyes but not disapear, i can sleep but not escape
once their closed, the shadows never end & the darkness only gapes
held apart from others, strangers being made of familiar faces
because everything i thought i knew just evaporates to empty spaces
emotion that profusely bleeds, yet an insanity pulsates through me
recluse is this bipolar being, held down by weight only few see
its useless to run from it, its too late to escape its peircing stare
cant hide because no matter where i go pain will always find me there

[Psycho69]

I think I wrote something.. if not more then one piece saying the same thing.. you just worded it a HELL of a lot better.

Great piece.. I've read some of your stuff before, inspired me a couple times.

Keep it up.

[SwollWop]

Are you guys trying to write poetry or song lyrics? And don't give me the bullshit about how lyrics are poetry. I'm aware of that, but these sound more like lyrics.

Anyway, the rhyme scheme is boring and predictable and you tell too much. SHOW, GODDAMMIT!

[Famous420]

ey psycho... thanks youve inspired me aswell

swoll... i wasnt tryna write anything... wasnt aiming to write a certain thing.. just writing. thanks tho

[WHITEnight]

it was really good

[elemental]

a deep & twisted defintion of elusion----double thumbs up.