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    anxiety makes me so distant, my troubles dont sound to your deaf ears
    while i drown in pools of worry implying persistent doubt & fear
    a lucid mind? never that. sometimes i cant even reach myself
    constant uncertainty conjures feelings that are too often felt
    i pretend noones watching, invisible, to not be seen at all
    i send myself into mental torture, no peace within these walls
    relentless trepidation & mind bent worries that haunt my sleepless nights
    deep distress & i cant dampen the voices once i turn out the lights
    i cover every angle with reason till i drive myself insane
    & everything i know about myself vacates me as it slowly drains
    i can close my eyes but not disapear, i can sleep but not escape
    once their closed, the shadows never end & the darkness only gapes
    held apart from others, strangers being made of familiar faces
    because everything i thought i knew just evaporates to empty spaces
    emotion that profusely bleeds, yet an insanity pulsates through me
    recluse is this bipolar being, held down by weight only few see
    its useless to run from it, its too late to escape its peircing stare
    cant hide because no matter where i go pain will always find me there
    ặmōů420


    ... The Perfect Murder Ft. EmsGirl69 ...
    ... Empty ...
    ... Suicide ...
    ... Water & Blood Ft. Capital P ...
    ... Serial Killers Ft. Punchline ...
    ... Deceased ...
    ... Reminisce ...
    ... Obscurity Ft. Capital P & Dominion ...


    AOL: pinkpanther72089
    MSN: colorblinde[email protected]

  • #2
    I think I wrote something.. if not more then one piece saying the same thing.. you just worded it a HELL of a lot better.

    Great piece.. I've read some of your stuff before, inspired me a couple times.

    Keep it up.
    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
    Let the night be too dark for me to see
    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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    • #3
      Are you guys trying to write poetry or song lyrics? And don't give me the bullshit about how lyrics are poetry. I'm aware of that, but these sound more like lyrics.

      Anyway, the rhyme scheme is boring and predictable and you tell too much. SHOW, GODDAMMIT!
      Originally posted by Mycall
      You're in "college".

      And have no lack of maturity.
      Originally posted by RSolo101
      btw u just jelous u cant grow facial hair? lol i could grow a full beard if i really wanted to jsut to let u kno aight

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      • #4
        ey psycho... thanks youve inspired me aswell

        swoll... i wasnt tryna write anything... wasnt aiming to write a certain thing.. just writing. thanks tho
        ặmōů420


        ... The Perfect Murder Ft. EmsGirl69 ...
        ... Empty ...
        ... Suicide ...
        ... Water & Blood Ft. Capital P ...
        ... Serial Killers Ft. Punchline ...
        ... Deceased ...
        ... Reminisce ...
        ... Obscurity Ft. Capital P & Dominion ...


        AOL: pinkpanther72089
        MSN: colorblinde[email protected]

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        • #5
          it was really good
          "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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          • #6
            a deep & twisted defintion of elusion----double thumbs up.

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