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    stranded.......

    Im stranded at sea, with no land in sight
    no compass to guide me, no paddles to streer
    thought the skys are clear i see nothing
    stranded all alone with no hope
    able to stay alive hopping for the day i will eventualy be saved
    when will my saviour come
    show me the way and hand me a paddle
    not even drifting, the seas are calm so im goin no where
    alone in my mind
    confused all the time........

    aight , to most ppl that is a bunch of bulshit and means nothin but to some i hope u can relate, or am i just crazy?
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  • #2
    Hon,

    It is a sweet little poem and a nice dream, but you gotta get your own paddle, make it if you have to. You have to save yourself. Don't look for a saviour. Even if you did find one, it wouldn't last. Until you can take care of yourself and be happy with who you are and like yourself and your life, you will always be searching. Look inside instead of out for your answers.

    T
    "I will go down with this ship
    And I won't put my hands up and surrender
    There will be no white flag above my door
    I'm in love and always will be "


    Dragonweed T"aka Miss Buttersuckel,the sexiest woman north of the Tennessee River

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    • #3
      too abstract and not real
      i'm the reason angels and demons don't copulate.

      All I do is eat bananas and masturbate.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by unpriest
        too abstract and not real
        fuck you

        you dont even know what poetry is

        fuck you again

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        • #5
          you're right, i dont know what poetry is. but i do know what's crap.
          i'm the reason angels and demons don't copulate.

          All I do is eat bananas and masturbate.

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          • #6
            ur mind state is a disturbance?
            ::esco

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            • #7
              that was a poem? cool? i didnt know what the hell that was i was just feelin like shit, cos didnt sleep all night and had a fuckin head ach, and was sittin thinkin and writin free hand, that was just a cool lil quote i found when i read it back?

              ur mind state is a disturbance?
              yea my worst disturbance is myself, at least my own mind?(do no if that make sence but fuck)

              T....thanks girl you wise knowledge and advice always helps, what your sayin makes a lot of sence and im workin on that beleive me, but some times i just breakdown every once in a while and need to pick my self up again like now... the satispaction u get when u pick your self up again helps to make u feel stronger (lol do no if that made sence either?)



              ps--slick thanks for backin me up





              ps again? i got more kool quotes/poems(?) if u wanna hear? boout dreamin and wakin up? not think you really want to but just incase you do..?
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              • #8
                i thought that was really good.... like all poetry kinda strange, btu i thuought it was cool!!!!

                i want to here more!!!!


                sanks buddy

                -Ana
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                • #9
                  true poetry...i liked it (tho it reminded me of da time i nearly drowned)

                  well i'd sure like to read more, if u wanna post!!!!!
                  "If the world didn't suck we'd all fall off!"
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                  • #10
                    ok.....i dont know if this is poetry though? cos its just little quotes out of this thing i was writin? but any way.......

                    As much as you dream eventually you wake up and realise its just a dream

                    My life is a constant cycle of dreaming and waking up
                    Im fine when i dream, but eventualy i always wake up
                    Their is two ways i could stay happy
                    I could either dream forever or stay awake
                    for a period of time i was awake
                    I was alive but then i was left to die
                    my spirit has died
                    im just a wanderin soul





                    ah i really dont think thats poetry but thier you go......

                    i still got more or have you had enough?
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                    • #11
                      POETRY is about expressin your thoughts n feelingz without worryin if sum1 likes'em or not - n it doesn't necessairly need to rhyme

                      more! more!

                      "If the world didn't suck we'd all fall off!"
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                      • #12
                        show how much i know about poetry!

                        aight hears another little bit..

                        I feel like im stuck in purgury, though im still on earth
                        I could stay hear all my life and patiently wait for heavent to open its gates, let me in, let me live,let me love
                        or, i could lose all hope now, give up and fall to hell
                        but theirs still a light in me yet, hope i still poses
                        wether this is good i do not know, cos the time may never come
                        and in time my false hope could lead me to destroy my own soul and kill myself



                        ok just so u dont freak out im not going to kill myself, i would never do that but its just a kinda....figure of speech!!!
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                        • #13
                          damn............

                          All I've got to say is, that's feelings....... from top to bottom. People can talk all the shit that they want, but that's how real people express themselves. I'ma drop a verse I wrote a while back, expressin' the way a friend of mine felt, this was the only way I could come close to knowin' how she felt. Hope y'all like it.
                          Last edited by The Faded One; 11-10-2001, 07:22 AM.
                          Would You Like Some Ketchup With That Ass Whoopin'?

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                          • #14
                            wow thanks, cant wait to hear that......
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                            • #15
                              This right here........

                              This was a combination of what I thought that she must have felt..... and some feelins' that I was goin' through at the time. Remember, this was a rhyme that I put together when I first started rhymin'....... tell me what you think.......

                              The day I hit this Earth, my life was set from the start/
                              Growin' up in central Cali, a place held close to my heart/
                              Seein' nothin' but fake thugs and triffelin' ass little bitches/
                              Makes me wish I'd of never grown to big for my britches/
                              It's been this way now goin' strong on my 19th year/
                              Gotta drown away these problems with fat blunts and cases of beer/
                              Droppin' tabs, doin' lines, chasin' um down with fucked up elixers/
                              No excuse for my problems, hittin' the bottle with no bitch ass mixers/
                              School only teaches us of the things to look foward to/
                              No one givin' a fuck about the pain and drama we all are goin' through/
                              Life is a game, with fucked up rules, and you only get one chance/
                              People sellin' they bodies, sellin' they souls, to afraid to take a stance/
                              These days people are too concerned with troubles to far beyond are reach/
                              We need to be more concerned with the wars goin' on in our own streets/
                              So what does it matter, we don't mean much, do much, don't talk or even think much/
                              Then tell me why everyday I awake with a pain that rips me apart with such/
                              Anger and guilt, feelin's you don't ever wanna leave undone/
                              Then tell me why everyday I wake up with my mouth around a the barrel of a gun/
                              Contemplatin' my devils, my skeletons, my demons that run the thoughts in my head/
                              Contemplatin' the thoughts of a world so fucked up that I'd be better off dead/
                              Who'd of thought, with all the challenges in life, life its self is the one I can't handle/
                              I'm punchin' my own card, and there ain't no need to burn a candle/
                              So these are the thoughts, the words of a man whos baggage in life has become way too exsessive/
                              But what'd you expect, you try livin' your life through the eyes of a manic depressive/

                              The Faded One
                              Would You Like Some Ketchup With That Ass Whoopin'?

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