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    full of glossy accessories
    she tempts a wandering hand
    she gently glides over the tops
    but she chooses to sit rather than stand.

    Picking up the mascara
    she hears a 'thud' from behind
    she knows what the score is
    she knows its full-time

    she sits quietly, her world surreal
    quietly staring, barely weeping
    she blankly invisions another life
    reality hits hard, her body's weakening

    the 'thud' has gone
    she turns around to her reflection
    she can cover most of it
    except the deception

    shes fine for a few days
    it seems like a perfect home life
    the bruises are fading
    they're the perfect husband and wife

    on show to the public
    neighbours dont realise a thing
    shes covered up well
    showing off her wedding ring

    'til its that time again
    she knows whats coming now
    he looks her in the eye
    hes raising each brow

    his face is red with anger
    his anger is bitter with fury
    hes tangled in a web of hatred
    so he can depend on his wife surely

    to be able to understand him
    she knows too well just how hes feeling
    he lays her softly on the bed
    she stares straight ahead to the ceiling

    he brings her down
    tries to take her pride again
    but this time she retaliates
    she cant take any more pain

    he strikes back with his hand
    a quick whip to her cheek
    shes so brittle, so lifeless
    to her disadvantage shes too weak

    he pins her legs down
    she sees a belt next to her head
    this time she could be scarred
    this time be left for dead

    he screams, he shouts so loud
    the blame is passed, clearly her fault
    a tear or two fall, then a wimper
    suddenly he comes to a hault

    he allows her to sit up
    he tells her this is it, enough's enough
    she reaches for the belt
    and grabs him by the cuff

    she strikes around his head
    once, twice, a third could do the job
    she finds herself laughing hysterically
    at his pathetic attempts to sob

    hes bleeding, he looks lifeless
    she lashes out at his face
    shes smiling uncontrollably
    shes put him in his place

    its not enough
    she wants more
    she tells him fiercely
    'you know the score'

    she rolls him onto his back
    and sits upon his stomach
    she whispers she loves him
    as his heart rate plummets

    shes picked up the knife
    tickles his cheek with the blade
    she rolls it across his neck
    and smiles as his pupils fade.

  • #2
    i often wonder why the fuck i try...can i get some feedback for fucks sake?

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    • #3
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      .........::::::::FUCK Y'ALL!!!::::::::.........
      back from the day when saying whore was cool

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      • #4
        lmao rachel...well i guess thats a start...

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        • #5
          i have no feedback to add
          IRON FIST OFFICIAL MIXTAPES

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          • #6
            urgh brandon you suck

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            • #7
              gyytggyu
              welcome to england, part of so-called great britain/
              but there aint a fucking thing great, about the way that were livin/

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              • #8
                i swear you're all dumb as fuck

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                • #9
                  nice...


                  weird how it turns around, huh?
                  playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by LadyConQuest
                    i swear you're all dumb as fuck
                    yes ok mrs sovereign rings
                    welcome to england, part of so-called great britain/
                    but there aint a fucking thing great, about the way that were livin/

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by Jez_humphrey
                      yes ok mrs sovereign rings

                      its 'miss' and plus i only have 'one' half sovereign 'ring'


                      only one person so far with something constructive to say...you one-track minded freeposting idiots.

                      thanks for the feeback vince...its appreciated

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                      • #12
                        its pretty good
                        I still can't believe you are gone.....

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                        • #13
                          that realllly good
                          Moe is a privilege, not a right

                          ...Betta Known As Tha DirtyDozenBabe...

                          Im The Illest White Girl..

                          I know my looks can be deceivin'

                          HeArT(U)BrEaKeR


                          oops

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                          • #14
                            thankyou now the feedbacks coming

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                            • #15
                              this was very nice

                              "And no matter how hard it gets, no one truly prefers death...
                              and if the hurt ends, you're sure blessed...
                              ....remember the determination of your first step"

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