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  • some ANTI WAR lyrics...kinda my version of mosh

    I KNOW there is a forum for this...and i posted it there, but theres not a lot of people there, and i wanted feedback on the song. anyways, here ya go.....lemmie know whta u think.....this is my first freestyle...so be gentle..lol


    what if we got to decide/if we was takin tha ride...to iraq./
    Wonderin if we'd ever come back/
    or if wed be mailed home inside a body bag/
    along with our severed head, and a fuckin toe tag./
    what if there was a president who REALLY gave a shit/
    that cared so much for us/hed sacrifice his own kids/
    help em pack their bags/put em on a plane/
    dodgin bullets in the desert/lookin for hussein/
    but hed never do that/that'd be insane/
    cuz if one of them died/then hed feel the pain/
    that the parents of the lost feel/every single day/
    so hes on his knees in his suit/now he starts to pray/
    dear god this is mr president/you've made it so evident that i'm the evil resident of the whitehouse/and i really didn't care/
    that peoples kids are dying/but now my kids are there/
    and please forget how i've fucked my country/
    and make it irrelevant that i was blind and didn't see/
    but i pray to you/get my kids back to me safely
    /amen..mr president/ps take them before me

    This is MY first freestyle so...everyone lemmie know how I did ok? and its not done...and if someone wants to add, please do.....i'm interested to see what someone else would add

  • #2
    it sucks im not even reading that....

    You Can Only Find me In Free Stuff / Hot Deals Section

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    • #3
      eh..not too bad..i'd really like to hear it though because when i was reading it i got a "poemy" vibe and i cant really imagine how it would sound rapped.

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      • #4
        Is this on Encore?
        Seriously though, cool verse.
        I don't need the hype, the words are right they'll sell themselves

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        • #5
          Okay my political views aside, it sucked ass. Listen, Eminem made a song to get sales aka $. He didn't make a song so thousands of groupies can try to make their own songs.

          However, with political views in mind, i'd probably say....

























          It still sucks ass.
          Warpox exposes himself | Editorial 1 4 | 2Pox

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