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    My rhymes are so deep
    That itíll put your ass to sleep
    And when you hear these lyrics
    Your soul will be taken over by my spirit
    Iíll have u in whole nother realm
    In a whole nother zone
    30 people around, but yaíll feel alone
    Under my hypnosis, cause of my flow
    Itís crazy outta control
    They way I go and go and keep going
    Cause they way Iím flowiní
    Iím not even knowiní
    Whatís gunna crack tonight
    Got you on the edge of your seat
    Grippiní it tight
    I can hear your heat start to beat
    U just gotta take it like a man
    And stand on your own two feet

    One

    Peace



    How's this rap ya'll.... i did it in like 10 mins..... no joke!!! tell me what ya think????
    http://www.myspace.com/hiphopismylyfe

  • #2
    2/10. nothing at all interesting. anyway, go to the freestyle or poetry forum to post ur lyrics.
    [CENTER]Battle Record

    5-0-4

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    • #3
      Don't Rhyme Words Just To Rhyme Words

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      • #4
        Originally posted by West Coast Kid
        My rhymes are so deep
        That itíll put your ass to sleep
        I wouldn't recommend a career in marketing.
        Originally posted by SteWonYou
        sometimes you have to do what you have to do, and that might involve sucking dick
        Originally posted by Temerity
        understood that you don't fuck with Swizz
        Originally posted by Nianco
        Swizz...*Sighs*..I really hate you so much. I just want you to know that.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by West Coast Kid
          My rhymes are so deep
          That itíll put your ass to sleep
          And when you hear these lyrics
          Your soul will be taken over by my spirit
          Iíll have u in whole nother realm
          In a whole nother zone
          30 people around, but yaíll feel alone
          Under my hypnosis, cause of my flow
          Itís crazy outta control
          They way I go and go and keep going
          Cause they way Iím flowiní
          Iím not even knowiní
          Whatís gunna crack tonight
          Got you on the edge of your seat
          Grippiní it tight
          I can hear your heat start to beat
          U just gotta take it like a man
          And stand on your own two feet

          One

          Peace



          How's this rap ya'll.... i did it in like 10 mins..... no joke!!! tell me what ya think????
          Use the netcee section n anyways I would give it a 1/10 work on everything.

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          • #6
            Add multis, use metaphors, and gain a bigger vocabulary...
            "It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it." -- Aristotle

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            • #7
              You suck. You rap like a gay poet.
              download the newest Helmz mixtape...
              http://www.datpiff.com/Helmz_Benefit...l.m182731.html

              tweet @ewhitsHelmz

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              • #8
                My rhymes are so deep
                That itíll put your ass to sleep

                that literally almost happened

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by Helmz
                  You suck. You rap like a gay poet.
                  best metaphor ive seen in this thread.
                  [CENTER]Battle Record

                  5-0-4

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by D.um.X
                    best metaphor ive seen in this thread.
                    go back to english class if you think that it was a metaphor

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                    • #11
                      You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to D.um.X again.

                      Tryed reppin ya back I'll do it later thx for it anyways... and Ya Ma Yee clam down oo it was a simile instead what are you an 8th grade English teacher

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                      • #12
                        Weaker than the italian military...
                        WINS: 90 / LOSSES: 0

                        ...in Mario Tennis


                        OH SHIT IT'S YOIN-TO-THE-K

                        if you want beef, then bring the ruckus Yoin-to-the-K just wants choc-late

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by dropout
                          Add multis, use metaphors, and gain a bigger vocabulary...
                          thnk u i will...... see i'm takin' this as positive shit
                          http://www.myspace.com/hiphopismylyfe

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                          • #14
                            I dont get u?? Did u post this in the freestyle forum??? you'd get better feedback there

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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by Helmz
                              You suck. You rap like a gay poet.
                              u write........ u a MC... See me i just love to write, i got a whole boook of rhymes.... i go to sleep makin' up shit..... it's funny cause when i'm just talkin' to people i sumtimes rhyme. pretty funny. I DON'T CARE I JUST WRITE
                              http://www.myspace.com/hiphopismylyfe

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