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Is it a bad thing to used the same rhyme through out your verse?????

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  • Is it a bad thing to used the same rhyme through out your verse?????

    Throwin a fury of SonicBooms, like Guile/
    Over whelmin wit doom, so just throw in tha towel/
    I,m comin out real soon, while you stuck in da file/
    Watch da full moon, turn me into an animal/
    One dats not groomed, wit ravin techniques and styles/
    Yo people know who, day just wanna no how/
    On stage you get booed, While I smoke N laugh wit a smile/
    Triggs, ya skillz been disapproved, N left you in denial/
    Step away from dis Duel, Or I ma make dis ya final/
    Hit wit da vocal harpoon, from distances of 500 miles/


    RATE THIS STYLE OF WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    MILLIENIUM G's


    Wins:31
    Loss:11
    KO's:20

  • #2
    eminem did a freestyle like this... ive written one too but they need to flow good or itll get old

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    • #3
      There's nothing wrong with that.
      www.thespeaks.com
      www.pinoyrap.com

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      • #4
        its cool unless u start rhyming the same actual word over and over again.

        like budden on 'pump it up' 3rd verse with 'playa' (i know he rhymed the word before 'playa' each time, but it still was fuckin retarded)

        however, it is very cool if you can rhyme a word with the same word if it has two different meanings, like.... (thinking of an example).... i dunno lol but u should know what im talkin about
        -------------------SLAYAR-------------------

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        • #5
          There's nothing wrong with that.. I've written shit like that... recently juss did a small piece like that.
          That's good work by the way... keep it up
          ...
          I feast upon the weak, so speek beef - I'll shoot you n scream "Increase the peace!" - Kuniva
          ...

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